Doors to Verity

I live in this imaginary world,
A world away from reality.
I fear to open the doors,
The doors to unveiled verity.
I shut my eyes and wish,
Wish forever to cling to this fantasy.

5/1/25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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McBride  Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Love it, thanks for sharing with us all , take care and cling on to writing : )
Walimbe Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Thank you stephan! glad you stopped by today, have a great day...
Goldsmith Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 1:04 PM
What a wonderful write you have here. Dreams or fantasy can take us away from this crazy world. Have a great/fun weekend..................
Walimbe Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Yes! Thank you so much...Glad you stopped by Paula :)
Crandall Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 12:31 PM
It's nice to live in fantasy now and then.
Walimbe Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:17 AM
Yes! Thank you David for stopping by :)
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:04 AM
I can relate to this poem. Sometimes I feel this way after writing or after waking from a very vivid dream! Great job!
Walimbe Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:19 AM
I know right! Thank you Karen for stopping by :)
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