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Doors to Verity

I live in this imaginary world, A world away from reality. I fear to open the doors, The doors to unveiled verity. I shut my eyes and wish, Wish forever to cling to this fantasy. 5/1/25

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Date: 1/26/2025 6:00:00 PM
Love it, thanks for sharing with us all , take care and cling on to writing : )
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/27/2025 4:33:00 AM
Thank you stephan! glad you stopped by today, have a great day...
Date: 1/24/2025 1:04:00 PM
What a wonderful write you have here. Dreams or fantasy can take us away from this crazy world. Have a great/fun weekend..................
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/26/2025 7:24:00 AM
Yes! Thank you so much...Glad you stopped by Paula :)
Date: 1/20/2025 12:31:00 PM
It's nice to live in fantasy now and then.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/21/2025 12:17:00 AM
Yes! Thank you David for stopping by :)
Date: 1/20/2025 4:04:00 AM
I can relate to this poem. Sometimes I feel this way after writing or after waking from a very vivid dream! Great job!
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 1/20/2025 5:19:00 AM
I know right! Thank you Karen for stopping by :)

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