Doors of Death

Open up a hall of nothing
And wish to peer inside
With doubtful eyes and naive legs
You move closer to the doors of death
And I sit still, in a shadow crying such silent tears
Hoping you'll turn around and that your fate will differ from theirs
The stacks of skeletons I watch over, day and night
For I am death's companion and friend
It isn't hearts I break, its souls I help take
And you shouldn't have wished you were dead

Tip-toe
'Creak!'
Freeze
Hold thy breath and take another tiny step
What is the point of this, this is the end
I laugh cruelly, nothing stops me
Does it reach you, send a shiver running through your fearful spine?
Letting the cackle echo, I take another soul and then wait for more
Shout out the words, the last the youngster will hear, I scream out:
'Idiocy is what brought you here my dear philandering fiend! To the last place you'll ever walk.'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 25, 2016 at 6:00 PM
NAIL, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 8:32 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nai. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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