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The doors are open wide To keep the good times guarded For future dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/28/2010 9:01:00 PM
A very interesting Senryu, Gert! The contrary image of "open wide" and "good times guarded" is an interesting paradox that tell us, not to waste time playing around, yet remain open as far as the giving of ourselves to realize our dreams. Thought provoking write. Hat mir gut gefallen. :) Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:24:00 AM
What about them close doors? What do they bring. Thanks
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Date: 3/25/2010 10:55:00 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Gert. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:17:00 AM
Open doors are welcoming, enjoyed
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:13:00 PM
A pleasure to read this delightful Senryu, Gert...thank you for reading mine and leaving your kind comments. .....Peace, love, audrey
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:57:00 PM
very nice write!thanx.
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:36:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Gert..luv.. Linda-Marie.. so very true too..
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:06:00 PM
nice message of hope, Gert! thanks for your comment to my Redford poem. I know he has a good side too. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/24/2010 2:48:00 PM
Interesting Senryu...It would be good if we all could keep the good times guarded for future dreams..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 1:41:00 PM
Ahh....so well said, thoughtful poem and makes me think for a minute! ~
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