Doors

The doors are open wide
To keep the good times guarded
For future dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Delacroix Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 9:01 PM
A very interesting Senryu, Gert! The contrary image of "open wide" and "good times guarded" is an interesting paradox that tell us, not to waste time playing around, yet remain open as far as the giving of ourselves to realize our dreams. Thought provoking write. Hat mir gut gefallen. :) Best wishes, Caroline.
A   Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 9:24 AM
What about them close doors? What do they bring. Thanks
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 10:55 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Gert. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Open doors are welcoming, enjoyed
Haick Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:13 PM
A pleasure to read this delightful Senryu, Gert...thank you for reading mine and leaving your kind comments. .....Peace, love, audrey
Frew Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 4:57 PM
very nice write!thanx.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 4:36 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Gert..luv.. Linda-Marie.. so very true too..
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 3:06 PM
nice message of hope, Gert! thanks for your comment to my Redford poem. I know he has a good side too. haha. LUv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Interesting Senryu...It would be good if we all could keep the good times guarded for future dreams..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Richards Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Ahh....so well said, thoughtful poem and makes me think for a minute! ~
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