Doors

so, 
when one door closes another opens?
well, I have faced slamming doors
and crushed dreams
but I search these dark halls 
and there are no open doors in sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 17, 2009 at 4:31 PM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Charmonique. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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December 17, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Sometimes we have to work awfully hard to push those doors open, Chamonique. Life doesn't always give us "open doors" to pursue, in spite of the old saying. And many people are feeling blue this time of year. Hope you can find happiness during the holidays! Love, Carolyn
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December 17, 2009 at 4:19 PM
It seems that way sometimes but some place way in the future you'll look back and think about these times and be able to say good things about it even it does not seem that way now. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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