Sidney Beck Poet Couplet

Door Wreath At Christmas

DOOR  WREATH  AT  CHRISTMAS 


It  honours  our  door,  RED berries  showing
SHOWING the way home, lamps of the spirit  glowing
GLOWING  circle   symbolizes our FAMILY
FAMILY   is Complete – but  guests are welcomed  happily


HAPPILY made by us  with love and care
CARE  in our hearts for  those not there
THERE it  will welcome them,  recalling a  prophet
PROPHESYING  such  a crown with droplets red



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For Dr. Ram  Mehta’s “WREATH”  contest
Written by Sydney  Peck

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Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 1:08 AM love the syle.. CHEERS for the big win, stdney..:) nette

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2011 at 4:40 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2011 at 9:46 AM Congratulations on your win Sydney in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin January 5, 2011 at 8:14 AM Hi . Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon

Daniel Cwiak January 5, 2011 at 6:13 AM Wonderfully written, Sydney. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 4, 2011 at 10:05 PM Many Congrats Sydney for clinching big win spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta

Wilma Neels January 4, 2011 at 5:14 AM Lovely verse Sydney and the touch with caps make it so cool. Congratulations on your win in the contest ;-) WN

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2011 at 9:42 PM V ERY nice, Sydney. I think it looked cool using all caps on the beginning words. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 3, 2011 at 5:31 PM Syd, so happy for your win. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman January 3, 2011 at 5:25 PM PROPHESYING such a crown with droplets red. Love this verse, Sydney. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick January 3, 2011 at 4:09 PM This is very nice..and nice to look at. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 3, 2011 at 4:01 PM Congrats Syd on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry.. enjoy your top ten success tonight with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2011 at 3:35 PM ongratulations, Sydney, for the seventh place win in my contest,

Carolyn Devonshire December 4, 2010 at 6:38 AM Syd, it's remarkable how you made the connection between the Christmas wreath and the wreath of thorns worn by Christ. Outstanding entry for the contest, done in perfect form too! Best wishes for success. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta December 4, 2010 at 3:31 AM Thanks for participating and revising the poem. It's OK