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Door To the Heart

So deep is the heart Sometimes surrounded by bars To break ,is an uphill task True love and emotion Can melt this strong barrier within. I try to enter where a lot failed and retreat Yet, I remain undeterred for I believe in love which brings succor to the wounded. Olusegun Arowolo ;Date:7-15-2014 Contest:'DOOR TO A WAYRA' sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:45:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 2:58:00 PM
determination to love is a blessing, olu.... this is a gem!.. your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:11:00 AM
Very wonderful Olusegun,, congrats on fine win!
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:49:00 PM
wonderful write Olusegun :) Grats on your win
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:41:00 PM
great message in your poem. The last two lines so wonderful! Congrats for the win, Olusegun.
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Date: 7/24/2014 1:57:00 PM
This write speaks so very well. Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:52:00 AM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:41:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Hugs jan from jadazzle xxx
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:20:00 AM
Perfectly done with lovely take on the theme, Olusegun. congrats
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Date: 7/22/2014 12:34:00 AM
I sure do hope Nette realizes that you have spread out your syllables among extra lines because this is a really nice poem and I hope to see it on the winners' list!!
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 7/24/2014 11:49:00 AM
Thanks,Andrea for detecting this error..it was my computer that did this,but it has been corrected...Thanks once more for your love,concern etc...
Date: 7/15/2014 7:17:00 PM
I have an image in my head of the heart being a door which we are free to open at the right time. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan
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