Olusegun Arowolo Poet Verse

Door To the Heart

So deep is the heart
Sometimes surrounded by bars
To break ,is an uphill task
True love and emotion
Can melt this strong barrier within.

I try to enter 
where  a lot failed and retreat
Yet, I remain undeterred
for I believe in love
which brings succor to the wounded.



Olusegun Arowolo 
;Date:7-15-2014

Contest:'DOOR TO A WAYRA' sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:45 PM Olusegun, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2014 at 2:58 PM determination to love is a blessing, olu.... this is a gem!.. your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 25, 2014 at 6:11 AM Very wonderful Olusegun,, congrats on fine win!

Casarah Nance July 24, 2014 at 9:49 PM wonderful write Olusegun :) Grats on your win

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2014 at 7:41 PM great message in your poem. The last two lines so wonderful! Congrats for the win, Olusegun.

Robert Lindley July 24, 2014 at 1:57 PM This write speaks so very well. Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!!!

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2014 at 9:52 AM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara

Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 6:41 AM dropping back with my congratulations Hugs jan from jadazzle xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta July 24, 2014 at 6:20 AM Perfectly done with lovely take on the theme, Olusegun. congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2014 at 12:34 AM I sure do hope Nette realizes that you have spread out your syllables among extra lines because this is a really nice poem and I hope to see it on the winners' list!! Olusegun Arowolo July 24, 2014 at 11:49 AM Thanks,Andrea for detecting this error..it was my computer that did this,but it has been corrected...Thanks once more for your love,concern etc...

Jadazzle United July 15, 2014 at 7:17 PM I have an image in my head of the heart being a door which we are free to open at the right time. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan