Doomsday

i live a simple life in my own way
saving love treasures everyday
hoping having my share of heaven
 after when finally comes my doomsday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 7:20 PM
Not just heaven until but AFTER. I like to think NO doomsday!! Only a better life beyond!
Poetry Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 5:17 AM
Andrea you are right not until but after... i will change the word, thank you for commenting... sakute alkas
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:43 PM
May your doomsday be a long, long way off!! I like your rubai too!!
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