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Doom Lingers

The shadow of death a scene so morbid A cry now arose from my motherland I fear when I hear the silent loom Were those my eyes that swim in doom? I falter when I see the funeral pyres lit My heart like stone sinking to the bottom of a endless pit My spirit wounded I shed not a tear My mind whirling in so much fear As death approached did he smile with scorn Or held on tight even at the break of dawn Fate was mocking entering every door Deaths rushing vengeance grabbing so many more How long will he take to build a score The sky in wrath painted red at dawn With bended knees I hit the floor My eyes now closed I beg and implore! 27.4.2021 Sponsor: Funom Makama Contest: A Poem of Horror. A Premier Contest Winner (Third Place )

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Date: 5/13/2021 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carol! death and when it comes! every creature fears but death is a greater reality than life!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/13/2021 5:33:00 PM
Hello Krish....Yes we are born and we die....Inbetween we manage.....Thanks dear Krish :)
Date: 5/12/2021 11:52:00 AM
Seeing whats happening in India at the moment is heartbreaking to see Carol, you captured the lingering doom well in your verse. A well deserved win, congratulations. Tom
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/12/2021 11:11:00 PM
Yes Tom....what really gets my goat are these terrible politicians who at any given time keep passing the buck and the blame game starts....while poor people without help are left to fend for themselves and die :( Thank you.
Date: 5/12/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for this wonderful entry. I truly enjoyed your work. A big big congratulations to you.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/12/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Funom Makama.....Things in India in the second wave of the pandemic is so heart breaking and like a horror show....Tried to express what I saw and felt....much appreciated :)

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