Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Doodling

There's something about doodling;
from an eye's perspective it looks like nonsense-
a long line coiling itself in an irrational manner,
either in bold or light.
Taking a closer look at the guess work art,
we feel the emotions of the artist
who did the work - his happiness, excitement,
anger, frustration.....they all appear somewhere
in the pattern created on paper...

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Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2017 at 7:14 AM Doodling, like handwriting analysis, perhaps even deeper. Very nice, Teddy! Congrats! Teddy Kimathi August 27, 2017 at 6:17 AM Thank you so much Kim, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Eve Roper November 18, 2015 at 4:11 PM Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Teddy, I love your write congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve Teddy Kimathi November 18, 2015 at 4:36 PM You are always welcome, Eve. I'm glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you for your applause! *^_^*

John Lawless November 18, 2015 at 8:26 AM Nicely done Teddy, congrats on the placement Teddy Kimathi November 18, 2015 at 4:31 PM Lol. Sorry John. My comment to Richard might had skipped. Thank you so much for your applause! ;-) Teddy Kimathi November 18, 2015 at 4:22 PM Hi Richard. Thank you very much for your applause and enjoying my work! ;-)

Richard Lamoureux November 18, 2015 at 8:26 AM Congratulations Teddy, you brought the opimage to life. Teddy Kimathi November 18, 2015 at 4:31 PM Thank you so much Richard! ;-)

Skat A November 17, 2015 at 9:57 PM Teddy, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT Teddy Kimathi November 17, 2015 at 11:40 PM Thanks Skat! *^_^* Have a nice day too! :-)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 17, 2015 at 7:00 PM Congratulations Teddy Teddy Kimathi November 17, 2015 at 11:40 PM Thanks Nayda! *^_^*

Jan Allison November 17, 2015 at 6:42 PM Like your take on the theme Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Teddy Kimathi November 17, 2015 at 11:39 PM Thank you for enjoying my write, and applauding me Jan! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2015 at 3:43 PM I like the succinct way you viewed this painting and wrote of it. HOpe you make the winners' list! Teddy Kimathi October 30, 2015 at 12:49 AM Thank you Andrea! *^_^* I'm expressing some of the ways we underestimate, in understanding what a child goes through or experiences....