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Don'T Wait 'Til Its Raining

Life prods us hard in the race to succeed. But why push so hard when we've more than we need? Too many men fail to see God’s good favor Until weather forbids them their toil and their labor. If the clouds rule the day, with their dark consternation, Before we will pause to obey inspiration, Then our verses will echo that tone of foreboding, And darker we'll wax while our lives are imploding. So “work while the sun shines”, yes, “work with a will”,* But take a break often and pick up your quill To write about things that are happy and funny. Don’t wait ‘til its raining. Act now, while its sunny! * From the Hymn "Today, While the Sun Shines" by L. Clark

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Date: 8/27/2017 12:21:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Dean - (metaphorically I agree) - Most of my poems are born on a rainy day ... when the sun is shining I will be out enjoying the day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:32:00 AM
I understand Anne-Lise. This is written metaphorically. I wrote this in a time when I was depressed and I only wrote on my down days. It was a challenge to myself to look for and write about something uplifting for a change. I appreciate your thoughtful comment. -- Dean
Date: 8/26/2017 6:05:00 PM
Amen, Dean!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:29:00 AM
:)
Date: 8/26/2017 2:23:00 PM
you uplift with this lively poem, dean... yes, the early bird catches the worm.... may you make hay while the sun shines..greeat job!..huggs
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks for taking time to read and comment Nette. I always appreciate it.
Date: 8/26/2017 10:55:00 AM
Very nice.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Dale.
Date: 8/26/2017 10:06:00 AM
Excellent message Dean! I love it and agree :)
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 8/26/2017 8:23:00 AM
As always, I love your mastery over rhyme, meter and cadence. And I like your message here too.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks for building me up Darren. You have a great understanding of poetry, I learn a lot from your work and comments.

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