Dont Tick Off the Dummy

DON’T TICK OFF THE DUMMY

he’s irate from the yelling,
there’s no telling what will befall the scene, before sundown.

Paul Newman’s balancing act
becomes unhinged...

the drop happens at the precipice of a proud building,
this dummy slips and plummets.

a mannequin, it seems, has the film crew reeling.
the director collapses, slipping up —

treating actors like flimsy paper dolls,
a surreal moment for Preminger,

close to his final act,
can he recover if blue eyes dies?

6/4/2018

*A crazy way to make a point! While filming a fight scene, Newman throws a mannequin off the building. The director had to have medical attention, as he thought Newman fell for real! See Wikipedia: The Exodus Movie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/7/2018 7:43:00 AM
Imagine the shock of the director and the shock of the wife of the supposed assassinated journalist as Paul indicates! Very interesting and well written story dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 6/5/2018 4:13:00 PM
You bring the scene to life with your striking words, Kim. Somebody sure meant to make a point:) ... which brings to mind the recent fake murder of a journalist...Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2018 4:14:00 PM
Oh yes! I saw that too, Paul! Crazy!
Date: 6/4/2018 10:14:00 PM
Interesting fact .. I would be like the director... :(
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2018 6:46:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Eve! I can’t even imagine...
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