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Don'T Short the Short

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An itty bitty rhyme I write for a reader's delight. Scintillating, radiating words of hope or meager fun rope a dope. For short is not my forte, philosophy contorted. 9/29/2023 Artimus - Susan Manley

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2023 7:17:00 AM

Susan, your beautifully crafted concise message has brought a burst of vibrant energy into my day. The delicate balance of hopeful optimism and lighthearted amusement is truly enchanting. I am immensely grateful that you took the time to visit my page and leave such a delightful comment.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 10:54:00 PM

I like it, Susan, just let it flow. Write what you think or write what you know. That Sara Etgen-Baker is my wife. Funny meeting her here. lol Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 1:29:00 PM

short isn't my forte either. I liked your itty, bitty poem. A delightful read. Sara

Susan Manley
Date: 9/29/2023 8:34:00 PM

Thanks, its the smallest I have ever written. Writing by rules is a new land to conquer.