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Despite being hoisted on arid ground, My barely hidden refuge, a sensual shadow On the road, I laid out for stifled sorrow distorted silhouettes of the decayed bound. Peaceful water and tangy, light wind warm light on my arms, and stoked sand Now, via fragmented flower-bed land A riot of magic florets and birds chimed. Lush conifer forests smell of pine Cool shade and light, crunching pine twigs Out into the sun, a breeze for sailing jigs Crickets leap around me on a supple line. A soft smile on my face and a passion I cannot hide eyes wide and unclasped, fantasizing about you blissful as a nostalgic journey at our venue I value that you are daydreaming too, eyes wide. Written: November 19, 2022 Don't Quit Your Daydream Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/10/2022 4:20:00 AM
Big Congrats to win. Last line is fantastic. I am charmed. Have Good days.
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Date: 12/10/2022 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/9/2022 8:19:00 PM
Back to your lovely poem of fantasy and dreaming with congratulations on your top win, dear Lasaad.
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Date: 12/9/2022 7:24:00 PM
I loved your serene images.... Congratulations on your third place win
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Date: 11/21/2022 7:09:00 AM
- A wonderful poem with feelings that run deep, Las - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/20/2022 3:18:00 PM
This is so beautiful and encouraging. I love the line ..a riot of magic florets and birds chimed. Much detail in this well written poem :)
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Date: 11/20/2022 10:00:00 AM
Daydreaming is the way to escape harsh reality, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Exceptional writing. Be blessed!
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Date: 11/20/2022 5:14:00 AM
Joyfully daydreaming, my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2022 1:02:00 AM
Wonderful images, despite some sadness.
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Date: 11/19/2022 10:31:00 PM
Despite all hardships and negativity, there is so much of beauty around and scope for day dreaming ! It makes life enjoyable . A great entry for the contest ! All the Best!
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