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Don'T Quit Your Daydream

Despite being hoisted on arid ground,
My barely hidden refuge, a sensual shadow
On the road, I laid out for stifled sorrow
distorted silhouettes of the decayed bound.

Peaceful water and tangy, light wind
warm light on my arms, and stoked sand
Now, via fragmented flower-bed land
A riot of magic florets and birds chimed.

Lush conifer forests smell of pine
Cool shade and light, crunching pine twigs
Out into the sun, a breeze for sailing jigs
Crickets leap around me on a supple line.

A soft smile on my face and a passion I cannot hide
eyes wide and unclasped, fantasizing about you
blissful as a nostalgic journey at our venue
I value that you are daydreaming too, eyes wide.

Written: November 19, 2022

Don't Quit Your Daydream Poetry Contest

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Anisha Dutta December 10, 2022 at 4:20 AM Big Congrats to win. Last line is fantastic. I am charmed. Have Good days.

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 10, 2022 at 12:50 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.

Valsa George December 9, 2022 at 8:19 PM Back to your lovely poem of fantasy and dreaming with congratulations on your top win, dear Lasaad.

Ranaditya Adhikary December 9, 2022 at 7:24 PM I loved your serene images.... Congratulations on your third place win

Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2022 at 7:09 AM - A wonderful poem with feelings that run deep, Las - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Heidi Sands November 20, 2022 at 3:18 PM This is so beautiful and encouraging. I love the line ..a riot of magic florets and birds chimed. Much detail in this well written poem :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 20, 2022 at 10:00 AM Daydreaming is the way to escape harsh reality, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Exceptional writing. Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit November 20, 2022 at 5:14 AM Joyfully daydreaming, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar November 20, 2022 at 1:02 AM Wonderful images, despite some sadness.

Valsa George November 19, 2022 at 10:31 PM Despite all hardships and negativity, there is so much of beauty around and scope for day dreaming ! It makes life enjoyable . A great entry for the contest ! All the Best!