Rama Balasubramanian Poet Concrete

Don'T Pluck Leaves and Flowers

        I 
       am 
      a leaf
    plucked
   from a tree
  by a cruel boy
 playfully, without
any thought about
my life. I am hungry,
thirsty & very lonely
 am waiting for my
  body to perish.
    Many step
     on me, it
       pains.
        I cry 
        by
        my
       se
        lf 
      he
    lp
   le   
ss
ly

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Krish Radhakrishna December 5, 2020 at 2:13 AM Very nice! wonder how you did this shape! I am not good at shape poems! Rama Balasubramanian December 5, 2020 at 2:45 AM Even I am not good at it! wanted to try one... it took a lot of time and I was dating getting irritated. I used spacebar and centre command to do it. Don't try not worth it.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 4, 2020 at 12:20 PM Hello Rama Balasubramanian, i agree never ever pluck a leaf from a flower. Or a floser from a leaf. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2020 at 10:37 AM Hello rama, i like the way you did this poem in to a shape. Enjoy your day my friend. Rama Balasubramanian December 4, 2020 at 6:18 PM Thanks for reading and commenting. You too have a great day ahead. Take care,Rama