Don'T Pass This On

Don’t Pass This On!
Listen, to this vibes dan; that na right, that na right man;
Violence in family, na right; peace and harmony, is the plan.
Homie, do not worry with Mr. Beat-Hers’ pitiful example;
Beating he wife daily; like she is the egg he want scramble.
After the beating, Mrs. Battered, swollen; in pain and distress;
Turn around, and beat all of them children, to relieve she stress.
Listen to me; listen, and understand this conscious meditation;
There is a lot more to being the big man and good husband.
Friend, you cannot follow them other men, in your family;
Beating-up you woman and you children is absolutely silly.
Watch me auntie, Mrs. Beat-Man, she does terrorize me uncle;
That is not how you and you woman will be a happy couple.
Whenever or wherever she get vex, he got to run fu he life;
If she catch him, she beat him; and imagine, that is he wife.
Listen brethren, Depressed father, used to beat-up he mother;
And Mrs. Vicious, he grandmother, used to beat he grandfather.
Take note, my friend; if you don’t stop this trend immediately;
It will continue; from generation to generation, in your ‘tree’.
You’ll gun suffer: you, you wife and children; you whole family; 
Buddy, in this situation, you family life will never, ever be happy.        
                                                                      End
                                                              By: Dion Penville

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/23/2014 5:36:00 PM
Dion :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2014 12:25:00 AM
Dion, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thank you! ;) :D
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