Don'T Open the Bag

The hairiest knee
is waving at me,
another one shows -
and tickles my nose.
As many appear,
I reach for a beer
and watch 'em emerge,
ignoring the urge
to run for my life -
or call for my wife.
My mouth is agape
as spiders escape
and swarm over me.
Oh, help me to flee...

written 11th June for Matt's Bag of Spiders contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/21/2023 9:52:00 AM
Jack, to the top of the class you go, this poem is really wonderful, and the short lines give it more glamour, great fun to read. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/19/2023 4:57:00 AM
Hang on in there, Jack...I'll throw you a thread! :) :) // paul
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Date: 6/14/2023 9:19:00 AM
Gave me a shiver thinking of a bad of spiders. That beer and me would have flown the coup. lol Have a wonderful week my friend. love phyl
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Date: 6/11/2023 4:19:00 PM
Ha!! Ha!! I can imagine wanting to escape. Thanks for sharing this contest entry and for dropping by my pages. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to to. Sara
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:37:00 AM
Short and right to the point. Love it, Jack
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Date: 6/11/2023 7:50:00 AM
lol Jack, your poem gave me chills, i would need more than a beer to get over that scenario happening for real:-) love to you and mum:-) jan xx
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