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Don'T Make Home a Heartbreak

My heart Was in a slumber so deep Almost as if poison Had put me to sleep But you You were the one Just that one special person Who could change that for me Because Your smile Was so gentle So kind Just like a fireplace With a warm embrace I would get enlaced every time Your words were so soft and kind It made my heart rewind But with the rewind It also Put thoughts in my mind I felt as if I wasn’t ready To know what true love is Because I was a fool of so many others games and tricks It gave me that feeling that was deep in my heart It felt like a shiver down my spine But the good kind The kind that made me want to stay with you forever Together I know I’m a lot to fix Because of the damage that was done By everyone else But with you I feel something greater I feel safe As if I have finally found my home So please Don’t make our love a mistake The heartbreak Will just be too much to take My heart will just fall asleep forever Never again to be awake ~11/2/2017

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Date: 2/13/2018 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Hannah, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:19:00 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Hannah :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 5:22:00 PM
A deep and emotive poem Hannah.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:52:00 AM
A tender pen :) congratulations x2! xomo
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:32:00 PM
A fine piece of poetry that expresses yearning for true love. Congrats on your win, Hannah.
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Jane Doe
Date: 12/1/2017 12:07:00 AM
Half of the credit goes to Pailey Gordon. but thank you:)
Date: 11/30/2017 9:27:00 PM
Wonderful Write! Congrats on the placement in my contest,, James Edward Lee Sr.
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Jane Doe
Date: 11/30/2017 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so much! Both me and Pailey worked really hard to make everything work out! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 11/3/2017 9:28:00 AM
Very deep, great collaboration..
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Jane Doe
Date: 11/30/2017 10:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/2/2017 6:24:00 PM
Wonderful job!!! Nice pairing together with P. Gordon. like a song "don't make a home a heartbreak. Wonderful verse Write On :) James
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