Don'T Lose Hope

When you are failed
Don't lose hope because you are not jailed
You are not aged
Or cut up with blade
It is the process of earth to be failed or success 
But you should give your best
It will not hurt your chest
Failed doesn't mean that you are now finished 
Your hardwork will not vanished 
When you'll work harder
You'll not be a barbar
You'll be very much sharper
So don't lose your hope 
You will not be dropped 
And you will be jobbed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ch001 Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Inspirational poem for those who lose their hope in everyday lives
Ajmal Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 2:31 AM
I really like the message you want to tell from your poem but you ve tried to force rhyme in your lines, rhyme can be good but don t let it control your poem
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