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Don'T Lose Hope

When you are failed Don't lose hope because you are not jailed You are not aged Or cut up with blade It is the process of earth to be failed or success But you should give your best It will not hurt your chest Failed doesn't mean that you are now finished Your hardwork will not vanished When you'll work harder You'll not be a barbar You'll be very much sharper So don't lose your hope You will not be dropped And you will be jobbed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/8/2019 3:34:00 PM
Inspirational poem for those who lose their hope in everyday lives
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:31:00 AM
I really like the message you want to tell from your poem but you ve tried to force rhyme in your lines, rhyme can be good but don t let it control your poem
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