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Don'T Lose Control

...there is a hunger inside me that i cannot contain its gnawing my insides....burning through my restraint its a live-wired bomb waiting to explode and destroy my life... my world..... my soul

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/1/2025 3:47:00 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Skat A

Date: 1/20/2016 9:12:00 PM

Deidre, enjoying your poem again. skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:17:00 PM

Deidre. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 3:00:00 AM

Deidre, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mzwandile Andile Mangqangala

Date: 5/25/2013 4:16:00 PM

That's a great poem. I like your word choice as well.

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 12:06:00 PM

Deidre, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Deidre Hendricks

Date: 5/24/2013 6:37:00 AM

thank you all for the positive feedback.....