Don'T Let Right Become Wrong

She is always right and he is never wrong,
Neither willing to concede and the anger rolls right along.
Finding each others faults as they fuel this awful flame,
Both claiming victory when neither will accept the blame.

With clinched jaws and fingers pointing,
Their words so damning, so hurtful, and so taunting.
Then it reaches its fiery crescendo,
Then neither one knows what to do or how to let go.

What had happened, it wasn’t always like this,
They used to hold hands and share a frequent kiss.
Then something bad happened, almost overnight,
Seems now they cannot speak to each other without it turning into a fight.

Little things started escalating and devouring their heart,
With no common grounds for reasoning maybe it would be best if they should part.
She said I’ll take our children and go stay for awhile with mom and dad,
Then it finally hit him he was about to lose the best thing he ever had.

It finally happened like someone turned on a light,
He said I’ve been a fool and I never again want us to fight.
He said I had a vision of living in this cold dark and lonely home alone.
And I didn’t like the picture, you’re the only love I’ve ever known.

Now they both got refocused and once more it is a home filled with love,
And now neither will let a push become a shove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/1/2009 3:34:00 PM
Phew!, what a brilliant write, this must appeal to so many out there. Every page you turn on this site reveals gem after gem, quite extraordinary. Kind regards James.
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Date: 5/1/2009 8:33:00 AM
I love the way they turned their lives around...it gives hope to others who may find themselves on this painful road. Well said. ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:55:00 PM
Great write, Ronald! Full of truth and wisdom that must have been gained from painful experience. My richest blessings go out to you. This is such an important piece, I'm putting it in my favorites with the hope that all who come across my favs will read you as well. Donna
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