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Dont Let Mom

dont let maama work to hard as to many blessings will be lost, even though sometimes you will be apart she will never leave you apart . her smile the sunshine of your dreams her voice the lightt of your darkness . her laughter the trance of totel peace her arms the center of yor being her heart the cradel of your soul as mamma carried and cared all for love . to see a beacon 0f hope out of pain. and fill a void of yesterdays dreams give her all your love and strenght for tm your dream will be approved with the blessings she bestowed to grow in wisdom and always serve

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Date: 5/21/2018 6:35:00 AM
It s a really lovely written poem, you have given a great tribute to your mother, but do look for typos, there are certain spelling mistakes in your poem but overall your poem is really nice, welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you ll enjoy your long stay here
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Date: 2/5/2018 6:18:00 AM
Great first post Raphael, nothing like a good mamma... Welcome to poetry soup..
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