Don'T Leave Me Hanging Sis

Don't leave me hanging sis !


I came out of no where with an agenda on the mind.
Joining the soup to be near my favorite one
knowing she is not hard to find
a game I did not plan to play
Until he called upon the first round.
giving it my best shot
than came round three and more. 
The poets here I started to explore
Not taking my poetry seriously
The writing just happen naturally
now I see why she visits everyone at the soup.
My sister who puts on a show with words
Is adored by her very own group
the Destroyer was my pet name 
She gave me when I was young
So envious of her, I broke the head of her only dolls.
using her poetry was the way she tortured me 
sitting me down while she read me her stuff.
Inside me she bestowed a poet of mischief
Now I like to tease everyones mind with words


I hate this poem..... Lol..don't read it... It was a joke way back than


(((for contest**Leave me hanging)))
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jones Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Hey there Linda. Just to let you know...you have this one posted twice. It was worth reading a second time. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 4:42 PM
congrats PD my BFF on featured poem this week on PS.. an awesome one to share with luv.. bff for life..
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 12:49 PM
Letting in us in with a snippet of your life..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on our work being featured this week...Sara
Rozario Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 12:24 PM
heyyy PD this aint bad...there's always something different in your poems...now i can't really explain what it is but it's all good trust me...:). So, congrats on being featured this week...Enjoy!!!
Austin Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 2:23 PM
I love this poem...read it everyone...and I aint jokin. Congrats on the selection PD. Love, daver
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Congrats on the feature this week on Po
Horsman Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 4:42 AM
i love this poem, from the readers perspective that is. what ever you write p.d gives us all a lift here on soup. harry
Neels Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Mission accomplish Sir! Now tell me who she is lol jk, I enjoyed this one too ~ WN
Gumbo Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 2:42 PM
wonderful reading this!
Byrd Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 7:17 AM
that was totally rad dude to so free flo and soft spoken
Johnson Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 12:35 AM
I like it
Galua Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 11:17 PM
this is so natural....you are indeed into writing...enjoyed this a lot....^_^ v
K. Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:35 AM
aaack! who is it?? aren't there any other clues? You sure left me hanging with this PD ;) I hope you and your sister will be reunited soon :) will be keeping my fingers crossed for that! Best of luck in the contest, I'm sure this is in the winner's list :)
Esquire Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Dear poet destroyer, I'm torn between Your Poetry as I grew up in foster homes with no real family (Father, Mother, Sisters, Brothers) I think if I had a sister such as Yours I would cherish her and not tease her mischiefiously than again maybe she would be a B h this is a Winning POEM in the " Leave me Hanging Contest and I Congratulate YOU now ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
Burton Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 2:14 PM
good one... sounds lie someone who never took poetry seriously but you got so much love for not taking it seriously and came out of the game with like three hot poems! congrtas on all your success, I love everything I read from you because you put some humor on complicated things. Enjoy your day or night:)
Loveless Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 11:11 AM
(: i like this. nice job.
Boy Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 9:29 AM
I do not get it,(Baby boy)
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:07 PM
soupmail!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Thankxxx for your critique' dear P.D. BBF and for the extra added info too.. I owe u one...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 10:34 AM
This did........indeed.......really leave me hanging! ....If this is true....I hope you find her and reunite in friendship. I had a big brother, who thought I was a "destroyer" also...but that's what little siblings usually do!! Great poem, and leaves me wondering!! :) Good luck!
Knop Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Dear PD. My poem for a Jewish Mother was meant for all mothers who were murderes during the Holocaust. My mother died - too early - from cancer. I wrote this poem long time ago. Have a nice week and thanks for your comment.... I myself have Jewish and Slavonic (Christian) roots as parts of my family come from the Spreewald (Lower Lustitia) area and were Sorbs, a West-Slavonic tribe. Gert
Austin Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Like your style. Refreshing, natural. Fun read. Love, daver
Knop Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:16 AM
Congrats on you feature this week, great write abnd so much told in this-awesome write! And thanks for commenting "Late Spring Explosion" which I wrote late at night...Have a great week ahead, my friend....Gert
Hickman Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:58 PM
a very intriguing write that for sure left it Hanging,,left everyone preety much,,so way to go for this fabulous writeand i hope your sister forgives you,,,I never had any sisters,,only brothers,,and they have left me,,Now,,anyway,,thank you for all the reading of my words and for taking the time to leave your words upon them,,,Blessings..Cecil
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:54 PM
love this! PD! jimbo
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