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Don'T Lay Your Wings Down To Die

I stood behind my deep breath with evidence sorrows leaking from my eyes, From next door a curious old poet walk by with a tongue of questions before I could reply he said       "Don't drown yourself in your in your deep breath, because this world make you cry. Don't throw yourself in a den of darkness, to get eaten by the roaring nights, because this world is standing in your light Brace your face against the moonlight for a while, so this world see the glow of your smile. When the earth change shape and get flat again, don't dangle the edge, Live to let everyone see   the grace in your style". As he further recite his poem I left go off my tears and held on to a smile. The final stanza of his poem end with these words " don't lay your wings down to die "

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Date: 3/23/2014 4:53:00 AM
Well written, so much in every line.
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Adrian Robinson
Date: 3/26/2014 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Larry
Date: 2/11/2014 8:53:00 PM
Adrian, , congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page:-) ~ Loving ~ SKAT
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Adrian Robinson
Date: 2/11/2014 9:25:00 PM
:) thank you dear friend.
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:53:00 PM
good night...
Date: 2/5/2014 2:46:00 PM
Unique poem, Adrian. Love it. You have a way with words and a fresh perspective. Sherese
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Adrian Robinson
Date: 2/7/2014 10:00:00 PM
:) thank you sherese
Date: 1/25/2014 10:23:00 PM
Adrain, this is very deep. ........Love ~SKAT~
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Adrian Robinson
Date: 2/7/2014 10:01:00 PM
Thank u skat :)

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