Don'T Lament Mid Life

Like a river flowing slow
My body is growing old

Metabolism slows, energy is
Getting low where did my 
youth go

 It's been said wisdom comes
With age though I don't consider
Myself a sage 
I do try to share with others
What I've learned And I've learned
this one thing for sure

 Like a river flowing slow
My body is growing old
And I ask myself rhetorically
Where did my youth go?

Chewing on Mid life's gooey taffy blues
 I stand in my mid-fifties  wondering where
My youth has gone

Looking back with aging eyes
Pondering how time so subtly
Slipped by I realize growing
Older has its own set of joys

The cherished memories I retain
The precious moments I now walk in 
Oh how blessed I am to have
Made it this far in life

So like a river flowing slow
Through my later years I'll go
 Smiling happily while I grow old
Thankful for each new day I behold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/17/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, I'll give it a try :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:18:00 PM
Don't stress it Ed, you're young yet. Old is when you're like 97. Lol! Yes we must appreciate and be grateful for each day we're given. Life is beautiful, life is fragile, we have but today to know we exist. So live and smile :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 8/16/2017 10:28:00 PM
I forgot to proofread again. So let me try this one more time, I wanted to tell you that I love the line; we have but today to know we exist. and like I said you should write a poem about that.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 8/16/2017 10:25:00 PM
Good evening Kina my friend. You're funny about the big old comment. I always tell people I won't be old until I've been in the ground six months. I love that line we have but today do you know we exist. That is such a sweet line you should write a poem on that. Thank you so much for the awesome comment I hope you have a wonderful and blessed evening. :-)
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