Dont Go

Don't go Stay. Don't go Stay. I said no But I mean, I don't know. The black moon is drowning over the opal sea. And my heart is a giant eagle beyond my will. Hold my hand, Please. Hold my hand, Please. I said I'm not ready, But I mean, I don't know. The red sun is exploding in a plum blue sky. And my heart is a giant eagle beyond my will. Sleep with me, Tonight. Sleep with me, Tonight. I said I'm not sure, But I mean, I don't know. The Lightening in my soul is burning, burning burning. And my heart is a giant eagle beyond my will.

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David Williams

Date: 7/5/2012 8:43:00 AM

Rebecca very descriptive and emotional..David welcome to the soup..

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/2/2012 6:21:00 PM

Lotsa emotion in this one... and vivid imagery. I was familiar with the 'no...I don't know' scenario when I was in my teens. It's well articulated here. Keith

Don Johnson

Date: 5/28/2012 4:44:00 PM

sorry babe when i write verse i don't make up the words, upon the holy sea etc i just write what comes 2 me...it relates to the other poem mentioned and was a comment on it.....love your poetry here ...

James Fraser

Date: 5/24/2012 12:27:00 AM

Ones desire can be so mixed, especially when hearts are involved. Love the shape Rebecca, nicely written. Have a koolio day :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2012 4:41:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Rebecca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol