Don'T Give Up On Me

I'm silently going insane 
Living in solitary confinement 
My feelings gone numb
The part is forlorn
Springs time comes with love
Here I am with no happy song

This my heart here Aching
Still feeling sorry for the past
How have been through it all,
The betrayal, the fails and the falls.
My tears turn cold, the pain in my chest arouse,
Then my anger spray like a cobra. 

I am struggling to be perfect.
If only you could see me through.
I know my actions scourge you down.
I made you sobber and torn your heart.
I have seen all your efforts,  
To brings back the enthusiastic 
But all I gave you is abusive words 
Shouting at you and disgracing you in the public.

I don't think you should wait for me"
You're so disgusting, A filthy  
Get out of my life you damn thing
I know those words hurt like crazy
How pain bursted in your voice 
How you shiver and your hair looks messy 
How you look pitiful and pale
With pockmarks on your face and bruises. 

I know you are done baby 
I know you made up your mind 
I know you're tired of the pain 
And tire of my Nagging and beating you up. 
I know you are tired of been hospitalized.
But abandoning me will never solve the problem.
Darling don't give up on me.

I don't care about the quarrel 
I don't care about the empty argument and fights
Darling, our house utensils are tapping to see us in bliss 
My beloved, don't give up on me 
I love you more than anything in this lonely world.
On knees I am, begging you, I know,
I made a lifetime mistakes, don't leave me now...... 
I need you now more than ever 
I know we can make this work again 
Please Don't give up on me 


Life is full of ups and downs 
I can not express in words 
How deeply sorry I am 
If only you can give me a second chance 
And let overcome this woeful obstacles 
I will love you as how the fish needs the water.
Don't you just give up on me 
Don't give up on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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