Don'T Give Up

If the years have been unkind to you,
and you find your in a state of blue.
Don't give up and call it quits,
because life doesn't seem to fit.
If you've tried one thing...then try another,
for your not alone, we all are brothers.
Some just haven't caught on yet,
but give them time...they will I bet.
Make no mistake, you've come for a reason,
it may feel like a joke, but I'm really not teasing.
It may take some time of soul searching by you,
but the answers will come if you stay true to you.

                 P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tran Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Words of wisdom. Very good, Pam Tu
Deremer Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Thank you.
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 4:18 PM
wise words indeed Pam:-) hugs Jan xx
Deremer Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Thank you.
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