Don'T Give Up

She walks down the street
Head held down low
What did she do?
What has this world come to?
No common decency
Thrown out on the streets
To decay
In this ever decaying world
Sad and depressed
But she doesn’t realize this
There’s always somebody out there that cares
I am right here
Never let someone tell you
You can’t do something
Live by the golden rule
If you want to be treated well
You have to treat them well first
It’s sad nowadays
As she still walks
But remember this
There’s always a place for you
Right here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 7:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Caleb. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2010 at 4:57 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight and its uplifting theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contests offered to members..good luck with luv ... and a Happy Thanksgiving..
Mehta Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 1:24 PM
Nice passionate thoughts you have penned in this write, Caleb
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November 22, 2010 at 11:05 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Caleb. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Beautiful
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