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Don'T Give Up

She walks down the street Head held down low What did she do? What has this world come to? No common decency Thrown out on the streets To decay In this ever decaying world Sad and depressed But she doesn’t realize this There’s always somebody out there that cares I am right here Never let someone tell you You can’t do something Live by the golden rule If you want to be treated well You have to treat them well first It’s sad nowadays As she still walks But remember this There’s always a place for you Right here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 7:00:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Caleb. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2010 4:57:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight and its uplifting theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contests offered to members..good luck with luv ... and a Happy Thanksgiving..
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:24:00 PM
Nice passionate thoughts you have penned in this write, Caleb
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:05:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Caleb. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful
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