Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

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Don'T Give Up

Don't Give Up 
Trust The lesson 
Breathe 
Thankyou B, or your insightful lines 


As I try to strike, down the lane of an unexpected illness 
this body gets knocked down from time to time  
I breathe the breath of God and fill my lungs with hope,   
needing to trust this lesson on hand, I learn to cope.

Giving up was never an option, from the very start 
courage and resourceful, I cannot buy at Walmart 
I know I have Angels by my side night and day 
watching everything I do and say; 

This morning the windows of my soul are wide open 
as I breathe in and out love caresses me and heals 
My spinal cord is turning into a strong willful rod, 
I do my best, then leave the rest to God...

By: Mystic Rose 
Love you B,

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Line Gauthier November 13, 2022 at 3:53 PM It was beautiful to hear you read this, Rose ~ bless you. Line xx

Anisha Dutta November 2, 2022 at 7:52 AM Me also always Optimist I never give up. Blessings

Sotto Poet November 1, 2022 at 4:00 PM I just adore your poetry, Rose, since it is so optimistic. Those who are going through comparable medical circumstances may find it quite encouraging that you have faith that angels would care of you. Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:08 AM I do believe in them, though unseen, I have seen them work in people's lives thank you for your gentle comment

Rico Leffanta November 1, 2022 at 11:27 AM Relax; che sera sera! Aloha! Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:07 AM Yes we do our best and leave the rest to God

L Milton Hankins November 1, 2022 at 10:16 AM Vie, the secret is perseverance, and I suspect you have a world of that! Blessings on ya! Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:07 AM Dear Milton, I do my best each day to make a difference in some elses life, we are all connected somewhat, somehow thanks for reading, I appreciate the comment

Valsa George November 1, 2022 at 6:31 AM Love this poem which is full of hope. Your belief that angels will take care of you is so inspiring to those who go through similar physical conditions. My younger sister has acute spinal stenosis ! May God heal you Rose ! Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:07 AM This was written for a dear friend Brittany who has nerve damage, she is slowly beginning to walk again

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2022 at 6:16 AM ... if you lose hope ... you lose everything ... never give up ... a lovely poem, Vie Rose :) Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:06 AM The nice thing about hope it regenerates each time you need it, love your comment Sunshine

Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 5:44 AM Soothing, encouraging sentiments throughout, Vienna. Hope B finds your note. Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:05 AM I sent it to her at the hospital, she did love it, thank you for commenting, Vijay

Unseeking Seeker November 1, 2022 at 5:04 AM Way to be, Mystic Rose, be strong and hold your faith, with a little help from God and from B Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:05 AM Yes, Seeker she needs our pr4ayrs and I think faith in God helps tremendously

Victor Buhagiar November 1, 2022 at 4:27 AM True, you should never give up. Mystic Rose Rose November 2, 2022 at 2:05 AM We need to keep a fighting spirit about us all the time Victor