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Don'T Give Up

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Don't Give Up Trust The lesson Breathe Thankyou B, or your insightful lines As I try to strike, down the lane of an unexpected illness this body gets knocked down from time to time I breathe the breath of God and fill my lungs with hope, needing to trust this lesson on hand, I learn to cope. Giving up was never an option, from the very start courage and resourceful, I cannot buy at Walmart I know I have Angels by my side night and day watching everything I do and say; This morning the windows of my soul are wide open as I breathe in and out love caresses me and heals My spinal cord is turning into a strong willful rod, I do my best, then leave the rest to God... By: Mystic Rose Love you B,

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2022 3:53:00 PM

It was beautiful to hear you read this, Rose ~ bless you. Line xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/2/2022 7:52:00 AM

Me also always Optimist I never give up. Blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/1/2022 4:00:00 PM

I just adore your poetry, Rose, since it is so optimistic. Those who are going through comparable medical circumstances may find it quite encouraging that you have faith that angels would care of you.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:08:00 AM

I do believe in them, though unseen, I have seen them work in people's lives thank you for your gentle comment

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/1/2022 11:27:00 AM

Relax; che sera sera! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:07:00 AM

Yes we do our best and leave the rest to God

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/1/2022 10:16:00 AM

Vie, the secret is perseverance, and I suspect you have a world of that! Blessings on ya!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:07:00 AM

Dear Milton, I do my best each day to make a difference in some elses life, we are all connected somewhat, somehow thanks for reading, I appreciate the comment

Valsa George

Date: 11/1/2022 6:31:00 AM

Love this poem which is full of hope. Your belief that angels will take care of you is so inspiring to those who go through similar physical conditions. My younger sister has acute spinal stenosis ! May God heal you Rose !

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:07:00 AM

This was written for a dear friend Brittany who has nerve damage, she is slowly beginning to walk again

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2022 6:16:00 AM

... if you lose hope ... you lose everything ... never give up ... a lovely poem, Vie Rose :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:06:00 AM

The nice thing about hope it regenerates each time you need it, love your comment Sunshine

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/1/2022 5:44:00 AM

Soothing, encouraging sentiments throughout, Vienna. Hope B finds your note.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:05:00 AM

I sent it to her at the hospital, she did love it, thank you for commenting, Vijay

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/1/2022 5:04:00 AM

Way to be, Mystic Rose, be strong and hold your faith, with a little help from God and from B

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:05:00 AM

Yes, Seeker she needs our pr4ayrs and I think faith in God helps tremendously

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2022 4:27:00 AM

True, you should never give up.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/2/2022 2:05:00 AM

We need to keep a fighting spirit about us all the time Victor