Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Senryu

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15.08.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Don'T Get Stuck -

                                        heart's truest calling
                                      not be dictated by past -
                                        memory stays fresh

                                         with fervent desire
                                  rider on a moonbeam dream -
                                         to vocalise dreams

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Joanna Daniel August 16, 2023 at 7:31 PM Lovely dreamy senryus, Anne-lise:)

Regina Mcintosh August 16, 2023 at 4:40 AM Love it. God bless you my friend. Love to you, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 6:05 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Gina :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose August 16, 2023 at 12:07 AM Dreams can be so volatile and so fragile, we need to protect them, love this Anne xo Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 2:04 AM - True, Vie Rose :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland August 15, 2023 at 5:56 PM wonderful haikus, perfect and thoughtful, thank you so much Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 2:04 AM - Senryu, Yann :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2023 at 2:40 PM Creative and imaginative work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 2:03 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 15, 2023 at 12:17 PM A wonderful/fun ~ write/picture. I enjoyed this magical one. "Good Luck" Hugs...Have a great day............. Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2023 at 12:44 PM - This is not a contest poem, Paula ... glad you liked it ... many thanks ... appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 15, 2023 at 11:43 AM Your poem is enchanting, Anne-Lise, as is the picture! hugs ;) Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2023 at 11:49 AM - Many thanks Evelyn, for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet August 15, 2023 at 11:09 AM I am consistently astounded by the ability to convey substantial meaning through concise language, Anne. Your selection of both the photo and the wording employed was truly distinctive. Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2023 at 11:20 AM - You know I rarely write long poems, Las ... short poems "are me" ... my teacher always said "explain yourself briefly" :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Bill Baker August 15, 2023 at 11:05 AM Loved your choice of adjectives, Anne-Lise. Your choice of photo was unique, a whole different look at Cinderella. LOL Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2023 at 11:12 AM - ... anything ... can happen in dreams ... a place where elephants can fly ... thank you very much for your comment, Bill :) - hugs

Ink Empress August 15, 2023 at 10:48 AM Rider on a moonbeam dream. I love that. Always amazes me how so much can be said in few words. “ memory stays fresh” that line is soul stirring. Impeccable write Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2023 at 11:14 AM - I like to write short poems ... "long A 4 poems" ... are boring to read :) - Thank you so much, appreciate your comment, Ink :) - hugs