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Don'T Feel Blue

Where the Ocean meets the Sky, let me fly. ~ Where the Azure greets the eye, set me nigh. ~ When the Denim fits my thigh, I will try. ~ When Blue butterflies flit by, I feel high. ~ That Royal Admiral guy makes me sigh. ~ Cerulean Iris cry, don't deny. ~ Sprinkle Periwinkle dye on my tie. ~ Give me some Blueberry pie on the sly. ~ Gentians in blooming supply satisfy. ~ When the Blue Jay calls nearby, I feel shy. ~ The Peacock waltzes thereby in reply. ~ The Bluebells nod their goodbye, let me lie. ~~~~~ 01.28.17

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Date: 3/3/2017 10:44:00 PM
I think you have mentioned every tone and shade of blue in this string of couplets. Beautifully done!
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:16:00 AM
This is so beautiful...almost a song.Well penned. :)
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Date: 1/29/2017 7:25:00 PM
Sweet!
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Date: 1/28/2017 12:00:00 PM
VERY cute way to do this challenge. ME LIKES!!
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:31:00 AM
Loved the internal rhyme along with the mono rhyme, I see a winner here!
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Date: 1/28/2017 10:31:00 AM
Nice try. Lol Great take on the contest, Jo. Hoping you are well:)
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