Don'T Fall...

The love, the unfathomable for me. 
Peeking through glass, from the 
phone line I gain feeling.

So long deprived and, suddenly
inundated. There is beauty in the 
clouds again just from words you
are saying.

The dark and the drab, clear up to
light. The hole in my soul miraculously
made right.

Loneliness and isolation, will it possibly 
leave? All my hopes and dreams may startling 
come to be.

Oh love, out of darkness you bring luminosity,
so long this dark road tread, so nearly
losing my sanity.

I don’t exaggerate when I speak of my near 
losing of me. It’s just being alone so long and, 
we’re not meant to be solitary.

For the Lord said,” for companionship we are 
made,” and it seems I’ve achieved his blessing,
for the angel of you has been brought my way.

If I am to assuming in the way I feel, all I know is ,
'it’s better to have loved and lost', than to take the 
chance of losing a dream. 

So I pray for you patience and, you’ll always 
have my eternal gratitude, for if and when darkness 
falls, I’m sure I’ll always love you..
Thank you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/17/2009 5:23:00 PM
Hi Bruno Ah, a beautiful write, straight from your heart. I think your gal is lucky to have you. I hope she gets a chance to read this. If true or not this is a lovely story of love and longing. I love your words and your rhyme. Take care, thanks for your most welcome comments on my poetry. Love Light Truth Patricia
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