Dont Die

Smile! but i want to die. but how can i take my life when god sacrificed his life and we shall have life and have it more abundantly .. LIFE . that simple word that you can change, it all depends how you live. you know, life has many challenges that you face, but its up to you to embrace that love from above! his gentleness is like a dove, everlasting is his name, and you take life as a game? YEAH, you can always choose how you want to play, but TODAY, you will change that thought of suicide, and push those tears aside, and remember, god is ON your side! his not like chris, john, bob, billy, or even Lucifer ! yeah LUCIFER .. does that name ring a bell ? not being a pastor but i decree and declare that we SHALL, not want to die, but stay alive! .. i dont care what the circumstance is, i know who GOD is, and i WILL let him live in ME ! Al'dayja Selby (A.T.S)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:12:00 PM

Aldayja, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 6:16:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Aldayja :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/23/2014 8:02:00 PM

Hi Al'dayja, this is such an excellent write - Bravo! Welcome to PoetrySoup!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2014 10:18:00 PM

Aldayja,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/21/2014 8:54:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Al'dayja. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!