Don'T Deny
Don't make her cry; why you can't control greed;
Don't snatch natural uniqueness; try
to rein your desire, don't act like bad guy.
Let her stay in peace; don't force her to bleed.
Why do you need more; your hunger for more
space, glitz, comfort, wealth at her cost imply
harming her natural beauty; go by
nature's law; keep right sense; don't ignore.
Damage will magnify, it'll pull you down.
Don't take nature's calm granted. Think why
so many lives lost in disaster; try
to acknowledge her rage; now learn, don't frown.
Your so called strength can't face her wrath, fury.
For our children curb your greed. Don't deny.
~X~X~X~
Betwixt Sonnet form was invented for Sonnet 1327 by Jose Rizal M. Reyes.
format: English (quatrain, quatrain, quatrain, couplet) rhyming pattern: abba cbbc dbbd bb
(**)It is an invented form using the frame of the English Sonnet by change of the rhyme scheme.
(Reference: http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/forums/topic/4710-reyes-sonnets-of-the-hand/)
Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/everysonnet/betwixt-sonnet/
Thanks to the efforts of Mr. Lawrence Eberhart for a wonderful resource at the Poets COLLECTIVE site.
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