Don'T Cry

a drop on a leaf

rolling across .. morning dew ....  

please mother .. don't you cry n
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 5:08 PM
The first two lines are very descriptive of the last line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Moreno Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Love the serenity of the first two lines...Raul
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