Don't Count

When you grow extremely old,
accept what can't be controlled.
You must think philosophically
every time you need to pee.
Years and nighttime trips?  Don't count -
too hard to reckon that amount.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 12:39 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Don't Count" write. Thanks for the laugh. One of these nights, I may pack a bag. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away............
Crandall Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:09 PM
haha, thanks Paula!
Wolf Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 7:37 PM
Good advice, David. Every time I'm aware of how many night trips I make to the BR, I get discouraged. Thanks, gw
Crandall Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Yep, I guess I don't have to feel like the lone ranger.
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