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Don'T Close Your Eyes

Don't close your eyes I am seeing myself in them, mirrors may lie but your eyes always speak the truth. Let me check my face how much of it is still face and how much turned to mask, let me judge how far I am off the track from my promise-days, let me see my eyes in your eyes how much they have lost innocence, how those learned lines of forehead replaced my candid face. I am getting blurred..... are you crying dear? teardrops in your eyes.... will they clean me,my image? Is it so? Then shed few teardrops for me. But..... Please don't close your eyes. © kashinath karmakar (21st June 2011) =============000============== Placement: 3rd (Nov. 2011) Contest:Everyone Knows Anything Goes

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Date: 8/4/2012 2:57:00 AM
kash, I just can't find it anywhere. Did you take it down??? I sure hope not. I want to see why I did not like it well enough....
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful Kash! all the emotions took you to a greata win - congratulations!
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:35:00 PM
Congrats Kash on a super fantastic third place win with elegant poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 2:20:00 PM
congrats on your win.cory
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:07:00 PM
Great emotion here kash. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. I'm not on Facebook anymore but thanks anyway. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 7/12/2011 11:19:00 PM
Beautifully written,a lot of emotion.
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:10:00 PM
Lovely one.. loved the way you twined the thoughts...
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:36:00 AM
Very deep emotion finds its expression in your poem,Kashi.Great write
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:00:00 AM
kashi, come visit.. i mentioned you in " soup safari" with respect... hope you won't mind..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2011 5:10:00 AM
Great one..Excellent topic chosen and great presentation..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 10:56:00 AM
helllo, are you there?? got a new ditty?? come on over, kashi..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:50:00 AM
Oh, Kash, I love the way you see yourself in her eyes. Beautifully written my friend. If this is for the mirror contest, I'm wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:39:00 PM
yes a stunning piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on All Alone Now.
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Date: 6/22/2011 9:21:00 AM
Absolutely stunning Kash, I just love the emotions you brought forth in this beauty.. A definite favourite for me.. ;)
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Date: 6/22/2011 4:41:00 AM
how tender and inviting, kashi.. spill out the contest as there are 2 that are similar in themes... winning wishes! come visit; got something new for you! :) huggs
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Date: 6/22/2011 12:58:00 AM
What a very stirring write this is, Kashinath! Your approach to the challenge is really cool, I really liked how you say that looking through other people's eyes gives a better reflection of ourselves than if we look at mirrors...way to go with this poem! btw sent you soupmail...
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:32:00 PM
WOW, kash,this is really good. One of your better ones. Was it for any contest?I am thinking mirrors. For sure, mirrors!! I really hope it does well for you in the contest. I am sitting here and toight it's my neck more than shoulders bothering me. Good grief. I just HAVE to get off, but I keep seeing comments. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/21/2011 9:43:00 PM
An interesting write with quite a few images of introspection. Nicely done
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