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Don'T Burn My Dreams

DON'T BURN MY DREAMS
Under crisp autumn’s azure sky the rustling leaves wind would pass by with requiem tunes of the fall, donning burning colors they’d fly. They’d fly, brush fondly you and me. Emotions would voice ecstasy in words of lyric I’d compose life would sink in its melody. Its melody got swept away by silent smoke to my sky grey, your fire blazed words of my lyric, don’t stoke your sly fire, I couldn’t say. I couldn’t say, let me weave in air the tapestry of love with flair in tinged words of hued fantasy, don’t break my dreams, burn in your fire.
September 22, 2018 Syllable count : 8 each line (checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 10/16/2018 9:23:00 AM
This is quite good! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:33:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/15/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 10/7/2018 5:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading, Subimal, congratulations on your win. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:06:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/6/2018 1:28:00 PM
Well penned, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:05:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 10/5/2018 3:37:00 PM
I see why this lovely poem is high on the winner's list Subimal. A superb job! Congratulations on your Second Placement! : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Date: 10/5/2018 1:56:00 PM
I like this rubaiyat, Subimal. It called to my heart; your imagery and sassiness stood out in big ways to me. You deserved to place! A nice play on words.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:05:00 AM
Thank you, Caren for your appreciation.
Date: 10/5/2018 10:21:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS. Your dreams will not be burnt. Warm Regards.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:04:00 AM
Thank you for your wishes.
Date: 10/5/2018 8:18:00 AM
Congrats, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.

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