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Don'T Burn My Dreams

DON'T BURN MY DREAMS
Under crisp autumn’s azure sky the rustling leaves wind would pass by with requiem tunes of the fall, donning burning colors they’d fly. They’d fly, brush fondly you and me. Emotions would voice ecstasy in words of lyric I’d compose life would sink in its melody. Its melody got swept away by silent smoke to my sky grey, your fire blazed words of my lyric, don’t stoke your sly fire, I couldn’t say. I couldn’t say, let me weave in air the tapestry of love with flair in tinged words of hued fantasy, don’t break my dreams, burn in your fire.
September 22, 2018 Syllable count : 8 each line (checked on howmanysyllables.com)
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Carber Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 9:23 AM
This is quite good! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:43 AM
Thank you, Line.
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:33 PM
I enjoyed reading, Subimal, congratulations on your win. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:06 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Well penned, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Thank you, Line.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 3:37 PM
I see why this lovely poem is high on the winner's list Subimal. A superb job! Congratulations on your Second Placement! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 1:56 PM
I like this rubaiyat, Subimal. It called to my heart; your imagery and sassiness stood out in big ways to me. You deserved to place! A nice play on words.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Thank you, Caren for your appreciation.
Dutta Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:21 AM
BIG CONGRATS. Your dreams will not be burnt. Warm Regards.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:04 AM
Thank you for your wishes.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Congrats, Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:03 AM
Thank you, Kim.
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