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Dont Blink

don’t blink riding this little now a ripple catching light atoms in a dance with life holding wisdom tight 8/27/2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2021 2:22:00 PM

So nice a little write. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/17/2020 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful poem.

Anna Hopper

Date: 9/12/2020 10:23:00 AM

I often wonder if I correctly interpret the meaning. Maybe I did, or maybe it can have more than one meaning. Either way, this is a fav!

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/9/2020 4:53:00 AM

So very true Mo. I love this

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2020 7:03:00 AM

"atoms in a dance with life", that one got me.. Yes we are, and the dance that holds sweet love is the flame that burns ever so true, sweet and bright. Great poetry my friend. A gem and a fav too..

Judy Ball

Date: 9/3/2020 3:32:00 PM

Hmmmm Sounds like sparkles on water to me. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/30/2020 1:37:00 PM

Deeply philosophical and beautiful Maureen. Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 10:22:00 AM

Too late... :/

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/28/2020 1:18:00 PM

“I have witnessed events so tiny and so fast, they could hardly be said to have occurred at all” Dr manhattan quote from watchmen movie, your don’t blink poem reminded me. Beautiful super Mo, cheers David.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/28/2020 12:31:00 PM

Pigeon Tart, dont blink...how tiny and perfect this moment shines. -Richard

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/28/2020 12:10:00 PM

OR one could dump it on Trump, who needs it most! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/28/2020 9:48:00 AM

Hold wisdom tight, before it vanishes in the light - this pearl glistens, Mo!