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Dont Blink

don’t blink

riding this little now
a ripple catching light
atoms in a dance with life
holding wisdom tight


8/27/2020

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Sara Kendrick

March 16, 2021 at 2:22 PM

So nice a little write. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Kenisha Shines

September 17, 2020 at 8:37 AM

Beautiful poem.

Anna Hopper

September 12, 2020 at 10:23 AM

I often wonder if I correctly interpret the meaning. Maybe I did, or maybe it can have more than one meaning. Either way, this is a fav!

Mark Koplin

September 9, 2020 at 4:53 AM

So very true Mo. I love this

Robert Lindley

September 4, 2020 at 7:03 AM

"atoms in a dance with life", that one got me.. Yes we are, and the dance that holds sweet love is the flame that burns ever so true, sweet and bright. Great poetry my friend. A gem and a fav too..

Judy Ball

September 3, 2020 at 3:32 PM

Hmmmm Sounds like sparkles on water to me. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Jeff Connelly

August 30, 2020 at 1:37 PM

Deeply philosophical and beautiful Maureen. Thank you.

Silent One

August 29, 2020 at 10:22 AM

Too late... :/

David Kavanagh

August 28, 2020 at 1:18 PM

“I have witnessed events so tiny and so fast, they could hardly be said to have occurred at all” Dr manhattan quote from watchmen movie, your don’t blink poem reminded me. Beautiful super Mo, cheers David.