Don'T Be Upset, Mommy

Mommy, don't be upset
When they say how you should stand, sit and eat 
While I munch on your blood and meat.

Just don't be upset
When they advise you on when I should be fed.
You alone know when my tummy needs bread

Mommy, don't be upset
When they say I was born lean or bulky, dark or fair
And force home remedies and weird aftercare

Just don't be upset
When they judge you for the cuts on your belly
Or the amount of milk generated by your body.

Don't be upset
When they rebuke you for keeping me on diapers
Or nag about your choices right from mittens to rompers. 

I know how you guarded me for nine months
Every time I kicked from inside, your heart went nuts
When my poor latching has hurt your nipples, 
I felt the wetness of your tears on my nerves.

We ate and slept together
We screamed and sang together
I was in your belly and you were in my blood
To meet each other, we worked as a team and laboured. 

Now, who are they to make you feel low? 
No, whatever they say doesn't help us grow.
Just don't be upset, Mommy. 
We'll do only that, what is best for us!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 10:01 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:58 PM
Mothers always know what’s best for their child it’s a natural instinct. A wonderful poem written from the unborn child’s point of view… Beryl
Chuuk Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:18 AM
The bond between mother and daughter is untouched. I truly love this. So beautifully written and endearing.
Salehi Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Mothers always do best...
George Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:05 PM
The tender attachment that begins before birth and continues through life between a mother and child is beautifully illustrated in powerful lines, dear Swetha.
May Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 10:41 AM
The unbreakable bond between mother and child shines through in this write, Powerful write
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Your poem speaks eloquently to the special bond between a mother and child. A touching write-- endearing sentiments. Well done, Swetha.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Heartfelt…Others might have opinions but a mom must figure out what is best for her little one!
Volumes Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 11:04 AM
This is an unusually beautiful poem, Swetha. When a baby is born, most mothers know that advice comes from everywhere, but the wise mother lets her own motherly instincts take over. Speaking from the baby's point of view is priceless. I love it. So original and so unique.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 10:33 AM
I love the idea of mommy don't be upset. Great poem.
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