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Don'T Be Slave To Your Mind

Don't be Slave to your mind Don't be Slave to your mind Alluring and Appealing , the desires are Desires will play when the mind is away Make you fall in the Blind Don't be Slave to your mind Don't be Slave to your mind Illusion stairs and trackless roads there are leading you down the garden path In a great ditch of blind fall Don't be Slave to your mind Don't be Slave to your mind Empty promises from the empty vessel It's like, in the air, building a Castle Reason is dying, leaving empty mind behind Don't be Slave to your mind Don't be Slave to your mind Luring to heart, alluring to mind Desires will unnerve you in a bit of a bind Doing away with it , a challenge to mankind Don't be Slave to your mind Don't be Slave to your mind Letting your reason drive your heart and soul, will make the world under you as a whole Don't let others control your heart and mind Don't be Slave to your mind

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/27/2019 2:52:00 PM

Although you insisted that, don't be Slave to your mind ... you know we are all are... interesting concept.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/27/2019 8:11:00 PM

Thanks Salehi for your honest comments

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2018 10:26:00 PM

An interesting perspective.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/4/2018 11:22:00 PM

Thanks dear Rick

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 7/23/2018 12:08:00 PM

Like It!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2018 12:41:00 PM

Hello Muhammad Imtiaz, your words flow well together. I agree keep writing. Have a nice day my friend.

David Smith

Date: 5/30/2018 10:27:00 PM

This flows very well. Good tempo. Finishes well too. Word choices very appropriate. Keep writing. Best regards David in NZ

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 6/3/2018 6:08:00 AM

Thanks David for your valuable and encouraging feedback

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/27/2018 11:09:00 PM

Well said; don't let ourselves become distracted -JT

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 5/28/2018 2:57:00 AM

Thanks Honestly for your valuable comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/25/2018 2:00:00 PM

The heart is so much more important . Though the mind plays a roll, the heart tells the mind where to go,

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/3/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Pixie for nice words and advice

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2018 7:41:00 AM

Worth reading again. I hope all is well with you my friend.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 4/18/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Richard...actually i was busy in my job

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/9/2018 8:45:00 AM

"Desires will play when the mind is away" - I like that :) Good advice here.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 4/9/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thansk Becca for your nice and lovely comments

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2018 9:41:00 AM

A message worth heeding. Well expressed my friend.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 4/4/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Richard

Yazmin Malik

Date: 3/29/2018 7:35:00 AM

Great!

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 4/9/2018 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Yazmin,

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/23/2018 2:20:00 PM

A very nice didactic poem, so true advising so nicely. We shouldn't be enslaved by blind heart n mind yes. Fine way u put it . Thanks soo much brother. God bless u for the supportive comments.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/23/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Syeda..........

Maria Williams

Date: 3/23/2018 7:46:00 AM

A very deep and profound write Muhammad. Deserves a second read....Maria

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/23/2018 8:00:00 AM

Thanks Maria for being the first commentor I would like to know about more of your famous poems....