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Don'T Be Slave To Your Mind

Don't be Slave to your mind 

Don't be Slave to your mind
Alluring and Appealing , the desires are
Desires will play when the mind is away
Make you fall in the Blind
Don't be Slave to your mind

Don't be Slave to your mind
Illusion stairs and trackless roads there are
leading you down the garden path
In a great ditch of blind fall
Don't be Slave to your mind

Don't be Slave to your mind
Empty promises from the empty vessel
It's like, in the air, building a Castle
Reason is dying, leaving empty mind behind
Don't be Slave to your mind

Don't be Slave to your mind
Luring to heart, alluring to mind
Desires will unnerve you in a bit of a bind
Doing away with it , a challenge to mankind
Don't be Slave to your mind

Don't be Slave to your mind
Letting your reason drive your heart and soul,
will make the world under you as a whole
Don't let others control your heart and mind
Don't be Slave to your mind

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Pashang Salehi November 27, 2019 at 2:52 PM Although you insisted that, don't be Slave to your mind ... you know we are all are... interesting concept. Muhammad Imtiaz November 27, 2019 at 8:11 PM Thanks Salehi for your honest comments

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2018 at 10:26 PM An interesting perspective. Muhammad Imtiaz November 4, 2018 at 11:22 PM Thanks dear Rick

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer July 23, 2018 at 12:08 PM Like It!!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2018 at 12:41 PM Hello Muhammad Imtiaz, your words flow well together. I agree keep writing. Have a nice day my friend.

David Smith May 30, 2018 at 10:27 PM This flows very well. Good tempo. Finishes well too. Word choices very appropriate. Keep writing. Best regards David in NZ Muhammad Imtiaz June 3, 2018 at 6:08 AM Thanks David for your valuable and encouraging feedback

Honestly J.T. May 27, 2018 at 11:09 PM Well said; don't let ourselves become distracted -JT Muhammad Imtiaz May 28, 2018 at 2:57 AM Thanks Honestly for your valuable comments.

Mystic Rose Rose April 25, 2018 at 2:00 PM The heart is so much more important . Though the mind plays a roll, the heart tells the mind where to go, Muhammad Imtiaz November 3, 2018 at 10:03 AM Thanks Pixie for nice words and advice

Richard Lamoureux April 18, 2018 at 7:41 AM Worth reading again. I hope all is well with you my friend. Muhammad Imtiaz April 18, 2018 at 8:02 AM Thanks Richard...actually i was busy in my job

Becca Teagan April 9, 2018 at 8:45 AM "Desires will play when the mind is away" - I like that :) Good advice here. Muhammad Imtiaz April 9, 2018 at 9:40 AM Thansk Becca for your nice and lovely comments

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2018 at 9:41 AM A message worth heeding. Well expressed my friend. Muhammad Imtiaz April 4, 2018 at 10:04 AM Thanks Richard

Yazmin Malik March 29, 2018 at 7:35 AM Great! Muhammad Imtiaz April 9, 2018 at 9:39 AM Thanks Yazmin,

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 23, 2018 at 2:20 PM A very nice didactic poem, so true advising so nicely. We shouldn't be enslaved by blind heart n mind yes. Fine way u put it . Thanks soo much brother. God bless u for the supportive comments. Muhammad Imtiaz March 23, 2018 at 2:33 PM Thanks Syeda..........

Maria Williams March 23, 2018 at 7:46 AM A very deep and profound write Muhammad. Deserves a second read....Maria Muhammad Imtiaz March 23, 2018 at 8:00 AM Thanks Maria for being the first commentor I would like to know about more of your famous poems....