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Don'T Be Hasty To Wander

We pledged a portion of our lives training ruling, When is it thriving to mandate and perform? What do words feign in the theater of living? Unlike dance, which is an achievement charm. I've barely suffered to forbear a lasting mark, By betraying these futile sensations on paper, I realize the purity of the most significant task, My way of life would radically grip to remember. The business idea made Disney on the up, The reality of a dream versus advert view, Undeniably we don't soar but rise each step, For the view and attain our genuine shaw. My performance overtakes that of the wise, I meander from one to the closest, awestruck, How are you presently, they enquire? A gaze, "Oh me?" I say gently. I'm doing fine, not stuck. A mistaken view of such a rare performance, My rarest bestowal in a decade of struggle, Oh, how I awed, dumbs that its discordance, An act of the stage never held a snuggle. After exerting my skills, I left the spot right, My faint dwell bears me with joy and calm, When the sun sets, I gain peace in the night, Hastily, the veil will fall off, so I won't harm. Stain not letting, be diverted by anything, Whatever deeds to hail you, elect varying, Essay not inciting to be swung by any turmoil, Any lifestyle drive love, trust, and verity, Recall that life is too short not to dwell fully.
1st place contest winner Written: May 14, 2022 The Greatest Performance of My Life Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 7/13/2022 9:53:00 PM
"Undeniably we don't soar but rise each step, For the view and attain our genuine shaw." We cannot reach the highest rung of the ladder all of a sudden. We need to take steady and paced steps ! Great poem. Congratulations dear friend !
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Date: 7/13/2022 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love your last time. When young, we think we have all the time in the world. Then one day the time/years caught to us. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Date: 5/15/2022 4:34:00 AM
The ending line spells the essence of your theme for life. We carry on no matter the struggles.
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Date: 5/14/2022 10:51:00 PM
Do we struggle in this life? To achieve the best, we must.
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