Donegal

A line of stones;
the threat of so much space,
a fallen horizon.

Salt grass
coarse with rain,
nights heavy with tides

and the battered story
of the sea,the broken gong
of the moon, strange friends.

Then,I knew not what to call
the rough curves of peat,
slight of the sea,

a bodhran wind over the rocks.
When I am no more;
let me melt in the rain

of this cold coast,
its own name shaped,
the seagull`s call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Harrington Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Lovely. I instinctively read it out loud with an Irish accent. I love the imagery here "the broken gong of the moon" is unbeatable. The "cold coast" is economical and yet very evocative. And if the last two lines aren't part of folklore then they should be. Just lovely. This is the work of a proper poet.
Philibert Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Thanks and my best wishes
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:08 AM
- A very well written poem, Leslie .... touching! - I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Philibert Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:13 AM
Hallo Anne, as I know you write well I am pleased you liked this, best wishes, Leslie
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