Done With You

Is there something wrong with me 
You will go out with her and she is my age 
Then you lie to me and say that your parents don't like me 
Then you go off and date my best friend who is my age 
wow I can not believe I ever liked you 

I am tired of trying to act like I am still not upset about the whole thing 
You are a great friend to me most of the time but I don't think you are a great person 
You love to play with my heart 
I thought since you knew what I have been through you would understand 
There was something I was wrong about because you don't understand any of it 

I am tried of dealing with you 
I am tried of getting calls from you at midnight 
I am tried of everything 
You need to keep holding on even if I am not here for you 
 
goodbye for now call me when you have your life figured out and your done with my friend 
It hurts to much to talk to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/23/2010 12:30:00 PM
Again..pick your battles..strong message sent here. Give it all over to God and let the Lord lead you in every area of your life.
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Date: 6/22/2010 3:46:00 PM
Heather, you and other girls - even boys will face these little tasks of growing up. If this happens to you or your friends, always remember there are other decent boys or girls out there who are not like who you wrote about. Keep writing and we will keep reading >> James
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:03:00 AM
wow..... did any of that actually hapen to you... that was a very good poem, i could feel what you were feeling inside when you wrote this poem. i am not kidding. this is a great poem sis. when i read this poem i felt like i was the one who was telling the story. And thats what i like to read. good job sis. keep it going. giggles
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:14:00 PM
Very powerful thoughts and strong determination
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Date: 6/20/2010 5:17:00 PM
A strong person you must be, to have sent out that message, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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