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Done , Is 2012

Done , is 2012


        A cloud that never showered 
        A seed deprived of sunshine
         A sea of dark unjust hands
         Ah!...Done.Deeds all done.

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Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2013 at 6:37 PM

wow... love this one again.... I hope this year I keep myself under the best clouds ad sunshine... no more depriving myself.... enjoyed...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

January 8, 2013 at 8:52 PM

Mehnaz, wow..wow... now this is a magic pen... and i love that it is finally over with... looking forward to closing this 2013 deal...lol...to early hu...love this poem..pd

Mehnaz Veetil

January 9, 2013 at 1:20 PM

Thanks Linda....

Richard Lamoureux

January 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM

As for me, I had a lot of good memories from 2012. There were some dark moments that cast there shadow over the year, in particular the shooting of the Children in the USA, and the devastation in NewYork.

Mehnaz Veetil

January 8, 2013 at 2:23 PM

Yes and Thank you Richard.... Life gives ups and downs....