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Done Gone Too Far

I sailed by Mercury, Venus and Mars Past Neptune, Pluto and assorted stars The virus everywhere It's just too much to bear I still can't find one single open bar

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2020 6:52:00 PM

haha, Love your punch line!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2020 6:56:00 PM

Alright, Andrea! Thanks for letting me know. Smiles, Gershon

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/22/2020 1:41:00 PM

Great limerick, Gershon--funny. Janice

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 4:11:00 PM

Heh, heh. Thanks for letting me know, Janice! :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/22/2020 11:47:00 AM

Awesome Limerick, I think those that can will celebrate when this virus departs - the whole world! Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 12:53:00 PM

At least they'll breathe a sigh of relief! Cheers, gw

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/22/2020 7:01:00 AM

Hey Gersh...I have some grapes you can stomp on...or some old vinegar in my cupboard...how about some aftershave...stay safe my friend...we can go for a brewsky later....^WW^ :o)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 12:53:00 PM

Yup. We'll postpone those brewsky's for now, Wingsky. ~ Starsky

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/22/2020 5:21:00 AM

Lol.. Different needs for different souls.. Superb Limerick..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 12:52:00 PM

Actually, I don't drink... Just checking out the scenery for a couple of friends from the Kingdom who've gone wild here in the USA. lol. Thanks, Jenish.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2020 3:04:00 AM

I know many are struggling with not being able to go our for a beer - doesn't bother me as I don't drink. we are getting brew delivered for my hubby and our neighbour - our local brewery was all geared up for TT which isn't going to happen so he has stock he is selling cheap - £4 for 2 pint containers ... shame he only delivers on the Island!:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 12:49:00 PM

I don't drink either. I was only looking for a 7-up and some lively conversation. lol. Thanks, Jan.