Don and Haley

there was a boy named don
he never did anything wrong
then one day he met haley
who was a little bit shady
they began to date 
their lives were filled with     

one day they decided
to live amongest the     
so haley chopped off her head
don was so depressed
so he pressed 
a knife to neck
and in a sec
he sliced his throt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Williams Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 10:20 PM
boy you and old david do sure have a deal going on huh. this was the worse piece of trash I have read yet,
Gray Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 7:08 PM
Ahhh man you better be ok T-T love you too XD
Gray Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 6:42 PM
sorry for what? nothings your fault sweetie
Gray Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 6:19 PM
damn this is deep
Watts Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 4:07 PM
Alex, do not even say that!!!!
Foulk Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 3:38 PM
this poem makes about as much sense, as i don't what. you need to learn how to write poetry.
Piper Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 2:55 PM
I'm 31. I've been on this site for awhile, just haven't logged in recently. I've been working on my book that just got published: https://www.createspace.com/3354023
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