Valsa George Poet Couplet

Dominic's Sad Plight

For Dominic, love at first sight was narcotic, it made him quixotic
Initially he was all erotic, but at the end, was kicked out as neurotic

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Caren Krutsinger December 2, 2021 at 8:44 PM This has incredible punch and terrific end rhymes!

Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2021 at 6:19 PM Nicely done, Valsa! Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:19 PM Thank you much Kim !

Unseeking Seeker December 1, 2021 at 6:06 PM Hahaha! Very witty two liner! Good luck in the contest, Valsa Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:18 PM Thanks a lot friend for visiting my page and the appreciative comment !

Gershon Wolf December 1, 2021 at 5:39 PM Dominic most definitely sounds psychotic! lol. ~ gw Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:17 PM Initially he was sound, but after entering into the loop, he turned psychotic ! Poor man ! Thanks dear friend !

Judy Ball December 1, 2021 at 1:48 PM Too cute Valsa. Very clever. God Bless, JB Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:15 PM Thanks a lot Judy ! Glad you feel it as cute! Stay blessed!

Rico Leffanta December 1, 2021 at 10:39 AM Sounds like a Trump euology . . . . Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:14 PM I have forgotten all about Trump.... ! He is not worthy to be remembered !

Mystic Rose Rose December 1, 2021 at 9:42 AM lol I love your witty two lines dear Valsa, creative and good, have a blessed day, Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:12 PM Thanks a lot dear Rose for visiting my page ! Glad you enjoyed it !

Victor Buhagiar December 1, 2021 at 8:59 AM A very intelligent couplet. One cannot but be amused reading it. ~~ Valsa George December 1, 2021 at 9:11 PM Thanks a lot Dear Victor !