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Dominic's Sad Plight

For Dominic, love at first sight was narcotic, it made him quixotic
Initially he was all erotic, but at the end, was kicked out as neurotic

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/2/2021 8:44:00 PM This has incredible punch and terrific end rhymes! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/1/2021 6:19:00 PM Nicely done, Valsa! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:19:00 PM Thank you much Kim !

Unseeking Seeker Date: 12/1/2021 6:06:00 PM Hahaha! Very witty two liner! Good luck in the contest, Valsa Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:18:00 PM Thanks a lot friend for visiting my page and the appreciative comment !

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/1/2021 5:39:00 PM Dominic most definitely sounds psychotic! lol. ~ gw Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:17:00 PM Initially he was sound, but after entering into the loop, he turned psychotic ! Poor man ! Thanks dear friend !

Judy Ball Date: 12/1/2021 1:48:00 PM Too cute Valsa. Very clever. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:15:00 PM Thanks a lot Judy ! Glad you feel it as cute! Stay blessed!

Rico Leffanta Date: 12/1/2021 10:39:00 AM Sounds like a Trump euology . . . . Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:14:00 PM I have forgotten all about Trump.... ! He is not worthy to be remembered !

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/1/2021 9:42:00 AM lol I love your witty two lines dear Valsa, creative and good, have a blessed day, Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:12:00 PM Thanks a lot dear Rose for visiting my page ! Glad you enjoyed it !

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/1/2021 8:59:00 AM A very intelligent couplet. One cannot but be amused reading it. ~~ Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/1/2021 9:11:00 PM Thanks a lot Dear Victor !