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Dominic's Sad Plight

For Dominic, love at first sight was narcotic, it made him quixotic Initially he was all erotic, but at the end, was kicked out as neurotic Your Funniest Couplet Ever Poetry Contest Sponsor- L Milton Hankins

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Date: 12/2/2021 8:44:00 PM
This has incredible punch and terrific end rhymes!
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Date: 12/1/2021 6:19:00 PM
Nicely done, Valsa!
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2021 9:19:00 PM
Thank you much Kim !
Date: 12/1/2021 6:06:00 PM
Hahaha! Very witty two liner! Good luck in the contest, Valsa
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot friend for visiting my page and the appreciative comment !
Date: 12/1/2021 5:39:00 PM
Dominic most definitely sounds psychotic! lol. ~ gw
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:17:00 PM
Initially he was sound, but after entering into the loop, he turned psychotic ! Poor man ! Thanks dear friend !
Date: 12/1/2021 1:48:00 PM
Too cute Valsa. Very clever. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:15:00 PM
Thanks a lot Judy ! Glad you feel it as cute! Stay blessed!
Date: 12/1/2021 10:39:00 AM
Sounds like a Trump euology . . . .
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2021 9:14:00 PM
I have forgotten all about Trump.... ! He is not worthy to be remembered !
Date: 12/1/2021 9:42:00 AM
lol I love your witty two lines dear Valsa, creative and good, have a blessed day,
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:12:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Rose for visiting my page ! Glad you enjoyed it !
Date: 12/1/2021 8:59:00 AM
A very intelligent couplet. One cannot but be amused reading it. ~~
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot Dear Victor !

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