Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Domesticated Geese

There once were white domesticated geese
Who were haughty and proud
Totally self-absorbed with group
Honked very long and loud

They stayed contained within their space
Strutted in their whiteness
As if they were graceful as swans
Swans suppress in rightness

canadian geese 
flew high overhead that day...
winter cold forcast

canadian geese
on migratory flight south...
predicts winter cold

When domesticated geese saw the elegant flight, realized that thoughts not right..  

Rhyme or verse called a form of Poulter's measure
Haiku
Monoku
Sponsor: Anthony Slauson
Contest: Whiteness

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Sharon Smith November 1, 2012 at 12:41 PM Nice poem! Couldn't help but think of the geese in the film Atristocats!

Sharon Smith November 1, 2012 at 12:40 PM Nice poem! Couldn't help but think of the geese in the film Atristocats!

Vesna Kovrlija October 10, 2012 at 11:54 PM I enjoyed reading this creative, original write!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2012 at 6:03 AM A wonderfully well written poem Sara - Have a amazing and happy new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman October 8, 2012 at 4:55 AM wonderful Sara, enjoyed this....

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2012 at 12:31 AM Sara, you did like me. I also had a longer poem and two small ones all tied together for this challenge, just have not posted it yet. Good job.

Russell Sivey October 7, 2012 at 6:28 PM What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed this creative piece, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit October 7, 2012 at 5:13 PM Somehow, I got the idea that the white geese were inhabitants of a planet that were being visited by extraterrestrials represented by the Canadian geese. I'm sure this interesting write can be interpreted in other ways.