Dolor

This thing is feeding on me 
I don't know, I feel it. 
I know how bad it is 
It turn my life hell 
My girl is gone away 
I find none, 
but memories to wet my face. 
I don't feel free, my heart is blacked. 
This thing is feeding on me 
I feel it, I die beneath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 17, 2016 at 6:55 PM
P & P..., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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August 18, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Thank you SKAT, you welcomed me warmly. It's so nice to meet new people out here. A big smile from my side. Cheers!
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